I like this letter a lot.

Except for this

Quote:
...I'm trying to understand what, if anything, you are willing to do, or to agree to, with regard to this subject. The reason I ask ...


You don't specifically ASK a question.

You say "I'm trying to understand..." but that is not a question.

Then you say, "The reason I ask," but you have not, in fact, asked.

So I would just insert the SPECIFIC question in very specific terms. It would only take a minor edit.


P.S. Are you ignoring me?