I think that it is an excellent start and written from your heart. I don't see any reason to rewrite it.
Deliver it from the heart, the same way you have written it.
-NOPkins-
I will ferret out an affair at any opportunity.
-An affair is the embodiment of entitlement, fueled by resentment and lack of respect. -An infidel will remain unreachable so long as their sense of entitlement exceeds their ability to reason.
I think her actions are screaming "I'm sorry". The truck issue is major.
All the best, -NOPkins-
I will ferret out an affair at any opportunity.
-An affair is the embodiment of entitlement, fueled by resentment and lack of respect. -An infidel will remain unreachable so long as their sense of entitlement exceeds their ability to reason.
The reason I said that is this was a technicality that blew up much larger than need be with my W and I. The intent is obvious, but we were each so sensitive that not including those small words communicated a “hedged” response. Heather’s H is focusing on her hedged position, keeping one foot out the door. It takes so little for her to simply say “I’m sorry” and close that suspicion in his mind.
I don’t mean to nit pick, but on some things it is important to nit pick. I think your letter is VERY good. When putting in the apology, do not make it conditional. Don’t say, I’m sorry, but if you hadn’t ____, or I’m sorry, what I was really trying to say was ___. Just say “I’m sorry” and nothing else. I am listening to your letter as I think your H might hear it, not as you mean to say it, KWIM?
