This is rather a random post as I'm not at all up on your sitch, but I read your poem. It would be a lovely anniversary present to give to your W in the context of a passionate, committed, monogomous R.
Outside of that context, all you will be doing is reminding W that she is causing you pain and not giving you what you want. In such a case, the poem is very pressuring, smothering, and appears needy and desparate. Don't deny the reality of your R not being one of H and W if that is not where it is emotionally right now. It is always better to err on giving the WAS too much space rather than too little. Indeed, I don't believe I've ever seen a LBS who managed to give too much space....
