1210, You sure its not too much? I mean, lets face it how can you treasure a love that isn't given. Well, I guess its better than my alternative poem "How do I hate thee, let me count the ways" That was a doozie. I wrote a nice one a while back about watching her lover go over a waterfall and crash on the rocks below, I think there was something about burning in the fires of hell in that one too. I like to think I've mellowed since then. Thanks for your input on my poem.
Quote: Well, I guess its better than my alternative poem "How do I hate thee, let me count the ways". I wrote a nice one a while back about watching her lover go over a waterfall and crash on the rocks below, I think there was something about burning in the fires of hell in that one too.
That is the nice thing about poetry.. it allows the writer to really express his or her feelings ! This would look good on a billboard or maybe a skywriting rental plane thing !
It's not too much at all...it's from you to her, the last line states that...there is love within and between you two - but right now, it's a diamond in the rough...
Thanks guys, I really felt this one, so I wrote it! Hey, Tom I think OSU's offline now, he said we could use his thread tonight. I promised we'd have it back by morning! Maybe we can offer a night out with his MIL for the first pledger to call in. What do you think?
CM, the best (or saddest) plagerism case I've seen on this BB was posted by a guy who wrote his W the most beautiful love letter of his life and then found she'd taken it, erased her name, put in her lovers, and emailed it to OM! Talk about a kick in the cajolis (is cajolis a real word?)!
Tom, what about a "Survivor: Ohio". You know, a group of people get stranded in, lets say Akron, with OSU's MIL. Last man left standing is the winner! We could get advertising revenue and OSU's back on line in no time. In fact, he's got a big screen TV too. Think about it, this could be big!
This would look good on a billboard or maybe a skywriting rental plane thing !
