Well perhaps you could consider posting your e-mail here and getting some feedback before you rush into it? Just a thought. Otherwise, my best advice: simplify and shorten, as much as possible. Is is kindly stated? No judgements, just what's so for you? Does every sentence in it (I mean EVERY word!) move you closer to your goal?
OK then, good luck. You know, she really loves you. She wants to have a great life with you. Don't forget to acknowledge, acknowledge, acknowledge, as this is scary for her too.
I am rooting for you
PositivelyListening ************************************** When one door of happiness closes, another one opens; but often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one which has been opened for us. - Helen Keller
