Who the hell knows Tim. She could really love it, or not. Anyway, I think it sounds fine, but then again, I was the one who printed lyrics and wrote my W a little note that she hated (allegedly) so what do I know.
I really hope she sees it for the gesture you intend. If she doesn't then you will at least know that pretty much all expressions of "love" are off limits like they are for me.
Keep us posted.

TMU


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