I think IHJ was actually giving you a compliment, not criticizing your writing/posting skills. IMHO.
HD:
I would like to know something... how was the sex? Was it quick, was it slow... did she O? how did your W act all day long AFTER you ML? I don't necessarily want play by plays, but I am curious.
While I think BF's suggestions are quite excellent (knock off the self-deprecation, bf, it doesn't become you... your writing/post was great), I might throw out a caution to you, depending on how you respond.
