Rap would definitely be better. My s was listening to Pop cd's on the way back from Chi-town and this is what I have in my head:

I break it down to the things we never planned
I chalk it up to the way I never understand
Your demands, I was drowning
So far it's not enough to make you see
You come back to me, come back to me
You can't get me out of your mind

Chorus:
I stop gaining ground
Every time I look around
But everywhere you are
I'll be under you
But I swear it wasn't fair
You left me there
But anywhere you are
I'll be under you