Y'know, I've been hunting through my more obscute music to try to fimd something with just the right mix of joy and love and sadness, and haven't been able to. So, I thought I'd make up my own. :-D

And yes, they're cheesy and basic - could probably do more with a poem format, but it actually fits to music in my head, so whatever - but here's the rough draft:

I don't know if I can take this;
don't know if you realize...
Wanting oh, so bad to touch you,
see the passion in your eyes,
feel your gentle hands upon me,
taste the fire in your kiss,
your skin, warm and soft against me -
baby, all I need is this.

Sometimes it feels so distant,
having you right here.
We laugh and love,
we share and dream,
but you pull back when I draw near.
We could be so much more,
though what we are is like a dream;
I fear to risk it all...
I fear to lose it all...
But, I want to have it all...
With you.

Your voice greets me every morning,
and fills my soul with joy;
Your embrace keeps me going,
when life treats my heart like a toy;
Your trust strengthens me to make it
through the thick, and through the thin;
And your love touches me like water,
fills the emptiness within.

But sometimes it feels so distant,
having you right here.
We laugh and love,
we share and dream,
but you pull back when I draw near.
We could be so much more,
though what we are is like a dream;
I fear to risk it all...
I fear to lose it all...
But, I want to have it all...
With you.

Last edited by Lina; 04/27/05 05:19 AM.

I am turning in revolution these are the scars that silence carved on me