Hi Rock, good job posting your draft here allowing feedback. Edit all the fluff and use the fewest words possible to get the point across. IMO, no need to mention Lawyer to her.


"Email me your proposal and I will review it."

"What is best for my kids is best for me"
Amor Fati
Link to quotes: https://www.divorcebusting.com/forums/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=2879712