M....IMO you might change up your opening sentence and re-word a couple of things. Nothing wrong with spicy food and meditation but that would not be the first thing I would want someone to know about me (unless that is very important to you). Also, the sentence about your kids to me reads like you don't do anything when you have them. You might try something like this. "I am the father of two amazing kids that I have 50% of the time." In my free time I enjoy, etc. etc. etc. or something like that. It's all in how you spin it.
Can you throw some humor in there? Girls like to laugh. I know you like to cook...what about that????
