Betsey, I think the letter is very well written. My one comment: I would share it with the MC first, just to get his read. I do appreciate where you are in your sitch, and the need you must feel for a decision--I've only been at this 4 or 5 months, I feel confident I can keep this up for at least 3 or 4 more months, but beyond that is a big question mark for me (unless W gives some indication that she will work with me, that OM is over). I truly admire your perseverance.
