I like it. It sounds stark, but I find the message to be a strong one. Maybe early on I would have been struck by the sadness of the two stories. Instead, their strength and resilience resonates. "The wolf's just a puppy and the door is double-locked..." and "I miss him like a hole in the head."
It works with where I am now. I'm not bitter. I am not angry. I am just moving forward and finding that to be a good thing.
H: 44, Me: 45 Married: 20 y Together: 25 y no kids Walk away: 12/15 Asked for temp separation 12/25/15 PA confirmed 3/16 (apparently neither the first, nor the last PA he has had) H filed for D 5/16