I like Sotto's changes, but I would remove the sentence saying you are "sure" your son will have lunch with her. It goes against the idea of letting him choose. Maybe instead suggest she contact S directly about lunch?


Me: 44
H: 44
Kids: 20, 16, 16, and 10
Together/Married: 22 years
H announced he was emotionally detached and considering D: 4/4/16
H announced he is going to try to stay and reconnect: 5/1/16