Chapter 3. Let the detachment begin

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Tonight, W shows up unscheduled. She wanted to see S10 and S15 - She's not seen them in 3 weeks. W came in, told S10 to tell me she was here. I motioned to W to come to kitchen, I said hello, she and my sister hugged. I gave her a quick update on S15, who had left for camp. We talked very briefly about the week. S10 showed her a souvenir from the trip, I walked her to the door and said goodbye.

When I see her tomorrow for her reg visit I'm thinking I will say. I understand you wanted to see the boys yesterday, in the future it would be best if you called before you came over. That would save time if S10 is out or I have guests etc.

How does that sound? Is it detached enough?