Thanks Darknes. I feel so silly. I'm normally a great writer. I love to do it, impressed everyone from my college profs to friends. Before she went nuts, W told all her friends if they needed help with anything to send it to me.
I knew my draft wasn't very good, but these pointed critiques/improvements are very welcome!!
Me: 35 W: 32 S: 4 T: 6 M: 4 Physical Separation official: 5/21 Currently: DR/DBing, Focusing on me and son
Cheating on a good person is like throwing away a diamond and picking up a rock.