Yeah I didn't make it about me at all - other than what I've done wrong but reflected on how she must feel about the situation. It's the 5 paragraphs, a little over a page.

He did a quick review and said overall it looks good but would get back to me with specific feedback, that was on 4/27... maybe I'll try and call.

I've had a good friend of mine review it since and he provided some good feedback. Thanks for the tips, I'll re-read it.

Me: 40 W: 45
T: 13, M: 11
1 D: 9

Suspect A 6/15
ILBINILWY 8/15, and 3/16
EA/PA Discovered 3/16
EA admitted 3/16
W Moved out 4/16
W opens R talk and says A over 1/17