Agreed. If anything, the only thing I would take out is the Yuck part at the beginning. THink of this as a conversation about the kids. Straight, to the point, just the facts.
M:26 H:32 T:8yrs ILYBNILWY/ "I'm not happy": 2/6/16 D-Day-discovered PA/EA: 2/10/16 Separated: 2/14/16 He's living with OW I moved to different state: 06/16 Currently: Trying to move forward