Now, the real work begins..Part II

[TimR]

Broke, I think it sounds fine... which probably means you need some work on it :-( Here is why I think it sounds fine. It is straight to the point and gets all the relevant information out. Here is why it may need work (and probably why I like it) it is straight business nothing personal just BAM here it is. Maybe, I hope you both have a great time. Or the Smiths are wonderful people. Maybe just add a phrase of fluff???