PigPen's Dropped Rope - WAW and Waiting (4)

[jedi]

Hi W,

My relationship with him is VERY important to me, and I do not want to disappear from his life nor him from mine, just because we are not together anymore. Coming to see him once in a while is not an acceptable option.

So I propose the following dates:

7/24 – 8/7 he’s with me.
8/7 – 8/21 he’s with you.
8/22 – 9/4 he’s with me.
9/5 – 9/20 he’s with you.

That’s two weeks with each of us, if you’d like longer stretches for travel convenience; I’m open to it.

I can come down on Friday evening and pick him up from WORK, as well as anytime on Sunday. Please let me know which is best.


Thanks,
PP

PP,

I'm not even sure I want to tag into this round since I'm going to be out of my league against Wonka and 25, but I took out what I think is a bunch of fluff when I quoted above. To me, the other parts seemed to come across as mind reading for some reason, or just plain unnecessary. Perhaps I just like the tone of it better when it's all about you and your needs, and anything to do with her and how she may or may not feel is left off. Either way, just my .02.

I will say however that if your dog's name is Baxter, and he likes cheese, then by all means leave the Spanish portion in there!