Everything looks good...though I'd have left off the parts in striking out:
BF: HI (waving like crazy) how are you? ME: Fine (truck pulls up) BF thats OW sons ME: Is he going with you? BF: yes he has been whining so OW brought him to go ME: Good that will be fun BF: well we are taking off (reaches down to give me hug) have a good night ME: we will (d8 and I) We will just be home BF K see you later Me Yep have a great time see you when you get home
