I think Wonka has done another sterling job helping with a message. Drew has helped, as well.
If you feel some of the wrods are words you don't use, for exmaple, paramount, change it to something you would say instead.
But I like the "meat" of it. You are getting excellent advice, my friend.
Good luck!
Bob
Me:55 yrs/W:51 yrs (has MS) M:14 yrs T:15 yrs No children together--3 each from previous marriages Wife Moved Out: 10/19/14 Wife Filed for Divorce: 10/20/14 Divorce Final: 10/21/15
