I agree with Wonka. I read it earlier today and wanted to post, but didn't have the chance to. What is the objective of the letter? Reading through it, I'm not quite sure what you are getting at sending it over to her. Like good ole english class, I would map out the purpose and make sure each paragraph supports the purpose. It seems to me like each paragraph is referencing some different perspective.

3kids,

Take a couple days to regroup. Try and get your mind off of the sitch. I'm sure everything is come rushing back in, but breath.....You've been so strong and focused. The news stinks, but don't backslide.

M:36 W:37
T: 15 M:11
S6 D5
BD: 8/10/14
IDLY: 8/12/14
S: 8/13/14 (she left, I stayed w/ kids)
D Mentioned: 10/15/14
Confronted about OM: 10/15/14
EA: ~4/13 PA: ~10/13
She filed: 8/15 (not final)