Well- I'm not one the better wordsmiths on this board, but it strikes me as a little bit more of a truth spear than a truth dart.
Just a suggestion.... although your way seems fine too...
I certainly understand that this makes you sad, as I feel that way every other week when I cannot see her. Unfortunately, it's too late to alter our plans at this late date, but we can talk about the kids birthdays in the future. It is still fairly recent since you initiated this separation, so it's to be expected that these misunderstandings will come up.
