Jim0987 #7 - rebuilding but can't tell what it is

[jim0987]

some scripting help please if you dont mind:

So I need to email my W this morning to confirm the christmas arrangements and i would like to try and make this email a success. Its is the last interaction i will have with W until sunday and so i'd rather it was relatively positive/constructive given the damage i did this morning.

this is what i'm thinking


Hey

Thank you for your help with the kids this morning. Its much appreciated.

I forgot to pick up the money for the DVD but it should be on my window sill if you want to grab it before you collect the kids

Just to confirm the arrangements for christmas and new year that we discussed this morning. Hopefully its about right.

KIDS SCHEDULE

If i've missed something or it doesn't quite work for you let me know

I know I wasnt in the best of moods this morning, please accept my apologies for that. Facing my first christmas without the kids has upset me but I know I need to do better with how I express that.

I hope that business case doesnt take too long and you can enjoy some of your planned day off.

Have a nice weekend with the kids

Jim


Does this sound about right. I dont want to be too weak and needy but at the sametime i dont want to pretend like i think my attitude this morning was fine.