It's hard to stay interested when you don't post very often. I mean, you haven't even given the second part yet? What are we suppose to respond to, if you give us something to read? Why are you dragging your feet around? You need to lite a case of dynamite and get on top of it.
Tell the story and get to DBing!
It is not about what you feel should work in your M. It is about doing the work that gets the right results. Do what works!