The only thing I'd add at the bottom is something along the lines of, "And if there is something I say that makes you uncomfortable, I'd certainly appreciate if you bring it to my attention because I want this to be a 2 way street."
Let her know that it's something you expect to do with her too.
Good luck- Bets
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