Meghan, I'm not in a good place right now but I wanted to stop in and see how you are. I think your email looks just right. But like I say, wait for someone else, because my perspective is utterly skewed.
I hope it gets you good results.
Me42, H40 D12, S8, S7 A revealed: 7/13 Sep 4/14; Agreed to D 1/15