Dev; I agree with Train regarding all the "that must be difficult" phrases. It's a good start. I would have done the same thing addressing each issue one at a time, but I like Wonka's suggestion to paring it down to salient points. I think it's good to build her self-esteem early in the response so she's propelled to keep reading. Most importantly, speak from your heart, but don't wear it on your sleeve.
M: 59 W: 53 M: 9 yrs T: 14 yrs No kids together but D30(hers), S27, S24, D21(all 3 mine) W moved out 11/18/2013 D-Day 12/14/2013 W moved back home 12/1/2014
