Glad you got all that down and out of your system, Dev. In addition to what Wonka is suggesting - and her suggestion will likely negate mine - I'd try to really limit the number of times you repeat the same validating phrases (i.e. "It must be very tough/difficult/hard"). While those ARE good phrases to use when validating, when we use them too often, they come across as "coached" and insincere.

But I think most of that will be taken care of automatically when you really crunch down the response. smile


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