I think it's pretty concise as-is. This would be my final communication to her. I have not initiated contact since November, only responding to communication from her.

What would you cut out or modify?

H: 29
WAXW: 30

Bomb Drop- 9/9/13
Negotiated Settlement- 5/9/14
D Final- 5/21/14
XW has breakdown in attorney lobby- 5/30/14