In keeping with the DB principles, I'd advise you to take our your Sharpie pen and make changes to it in keeping with the KISS and STFU tenets.
You do need to re-work the draft some more and then post it here for feedback.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Returning the ammunition seemed to be an issue for her, because I mentioned it a couple of weeks after she left and she asked "what do you plan to do with it?" After her episode in the attorney's office, it seems she really thinks of me negatively, and I want to put her mind at ease a bit.
^^ it is an exercise in mindreading big time, KDog! Don't go there. She needs to own her emotions. You have absolutely nothing to apologize for here.
