I think how job re-wrote the response sounded pretty good.. a little more like you are working as a team and he may take to that a little better. I think the line about the daughters sounded fine, I think you are reading into it.
M: 8 yrs T:14 Twins:7 S:5 BD:'NLILWY': Feb/2013 Mar/Apr/May: MC June: "living in limbo" Sept 12: H moves out Oct 20: reconciling Jan-Feb 2014:MC Feb 2014: separating, and H moved out.
