Luke... its better, needs polishing up a bit. Too wordy.

maybe try.... XXX - I am bringing salsa. Politeness = better results. Miss you, Dad.

Today... h was being obnoxious/demanding on the phone. I stated "If you are going to keep talking to me like that, I'm going to hang up".... not quite boxed (positive, negative, positive) the way my IC suggested....but, its a start. He quickly changed his tune.

Good luck.

M:46 H:49 T:20yrs
myD:22
H distant summer/12
H sleeping in b'ment: Nov/12
BD: Dec 2/12
asked me begin to move end of Jan/13
moved Jan 7/13 (left my stuff)
"agreed" to "working on r" Mar 3/13(lipservice!)