I agree with Cadet, it is too lengthy, and would keep it about business. Unless you wanted to add something brief about remaining friends, to show you have no hard feelings.
M: 8 yrs T:14 Twins:7 S:5 BD:'NLILWY': Feb/2013 Mar/Apr/May: MC June: "living in limbo" Sept 12: H moves out Oct 20: reconciling Jan-Feb 2014:MC Feb 2014: separating, and H moved out.