"In that one I ended up telling her that my goal was to be the best I could be to make her want me back."

Ouch. Don't EVER say something like that to her. Makes you sound like a stalker. Don't tell her how or what your changing. Just do it.

M-43 W-40
2D - 9 and 5

Emotion, yet peace.
Ignorance, yet knowledge.
Passion, yet serenity.
Chaos, yet harmony.
Death, yet a new life.

RECONCILED AND WISER