Some helpful advice TJP:

Break up your post a little.

This maybe sounds nit-picky, and it is not intended too be. It is intended to help.

That much story without any white, is daunting.


So...

Break it up a little.

OK?

Oh...stop lying. You don't have to be blunt about it, but don't lie either, lying becomes a habit. Not a good one.


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