Just checked in for the first time in days, looks like you're having a tough day. {{{{{{{{{{{{}}}}}}}}}}}}} What a positive thing to do change your state of mind - I like your poem! I like the way if flows. SOmething about where you placed the line breaks makes the beginning of eacn line resonate, compelling you on. I like the imagery too -
Gotta go put the boys to bed - we're flying to Georgia in the morning and I"ve got to get packing, too. {{{{{{{{{{{{{{}}}}}}}}}}}}} Hang in there Zoo!