W is Afrikaans speaking so weak, wordy and supplicating doesn't really do justice to how she would read it.
I don't understand what you mean here. Even if someone is from another culture, and would use different words than I do, the concepts and dynamics are the same.
Maybe it's just me. I'll be anxious to see what Serenity and others think of it. Just be sure not to definite "positive" by how she reacts, short-term. You're looking for consistent moves on her part back towards the marriage.
