I like it with the exception of the dancing part. Maybe she can attend another class when the OM is not there. Have you ever figured out what it is about the OM that she's attracted to? I'm sure she finds the dancing liberating for her.
M-43 W-40 2D - 9 and 5
Emotion, yet peace. Ignorance, yet knowledge. Passion, yet serenity. Chaos, yet harmony. Death, yet a new life.
