First two sentences is last paragraph could be combined OR, change the word "reasonable" in one of those sentences.
I'm not sure I would put in writing your "issues" that caused husband to leave, "that you apparently have worked on. I would let your changes speak for themselves, and really, I cannot imagine that he would leave his lovely family behind, period, without having some issue himself. Therefore, I would remove paragraph #2 completely.
Stick to matters and details of the Separation Agreement only (child support, visitation arrangments, temporary spousal support, pick-up places for kids, payments for Childress healthcare, activites, etc., utilities. I finially, would not use your response to inject any compliments. "Husband's attempt to be reasonable.". That is irrelevant, and out of place.
If there is anything about asset division, go over that with a fine tooth come as well. My response basically would mirror his point by point.
That's just my opinion. I am not a lawyer. Just a detail minded person. Yas
Married 27 Years Together 32 Years 4th Year of Separation; D-Day 1 = 9/08, D-Day 2 = 12/08 Divorce Final Sept. 17, 2012
