I like what's happening and most of the letter. I'd leave out the vision of the future she had without you...and imo it's a tad too long.
the sledgehammer paragraph seems like enough to me...but do what you will
b/c things are in transition.
Timing? Better late than never and yes, she wants to know you aren't doing it to stave off the divorce or at least not for financial reasons...
but that seems to be getting revealed...
Stay strong and stay on course Crimson...no backslides...keep expectations low so you don't get thrown off if she backs away
she's afraid...but she wants to believe in you.
M: 57 H: 60 M: 35 yrs S30,D28,D19 H off to Alaska 2006 Recon 7/07- 8/08 *2016* X = "ALASKA 2.0" GROUND HOG DAY I File D 10/16 OW DIV 2/26/2018 X marries OW 5/2016