Sounds good to me, my only suggestion might be to rephrase the part that says "help me understand" "I'm not quite sure if I understand your thoughts about the house" Just a thought, good luck, either way sounds good!
Gunny

m 54
XW 48
m 12
t 14
bomb 6-11
s 10-11
wife moved to other state 10-21-11
d 9-12

O GOD THY SEA IS SO GREAT AND MY BOAT IS SO SMALL!