You wouldn't happen to be an English major would you Accuray? I couldn't write that good of a letter if my life depended on it--and I guess it kinda does though huh? I really like the way you hit every topic without over explaining (which is a problem I have).
One thing I didn't like is the last line. I really don't want to wish her happiness unless it's with me (selfish, I know), but that's the way I feel. The other thing I didn't see here is any mention of the effects her decision is having on our kids. Should something be added to address these?
Other than those minor points, that's a hell of a writing job there Accuray. Any other suggestions?
Me36, W38 S12, S3 T20, M4 Bomb dropped 8/18/11 Moved out 8/18/11 Filed for D 10/20/11 OM Confirmed 11/5/11