Not quite in midseason form...yet

[25yearsmlc]

your phone conversations were great and so was your day and interactions and perspective

and the connection with old friends you were kind to!!! Yay for all that. Well done.

I'm not a fan of the letter at all.

But I know you're going to send it out anyhow. Can you please not tell her she's the only woman you'll ever love

or 'the one and only" b/c frankly, you don't know that, and if she never comes back I hope to God it's not true, and

second, it is =you and your "endless pursuit and availability" the way I read it.

What is your goal in sending it?


I know you'll SAY it's "just to tell her" and that you

"have NO expectations"

but I don't believe that, and I'm not sure you do either.

But tell me your storyline--what you tell yourself about this letter.

Is it to thank her for the good times and memories and tell her you are letting her go?

can't you just DO that?

But if you must write out that you are letting her go, b/c it's like how you could not force her to marry you or stay with you now

(which is weird to say, imo, b/c it's so obvious)

at least make it a whole lot shorter. Maybe half the length. She'll tune it out.

Plus, no offense, but it doesn't flow well.

Use a topic-thesis like sentence/(intro), THEN support it with an example or two, and then conclude.

Just my .02

((( )))



ps what # is that skin? He better not be #89...