That’s the gist of the convo. Most of it probably should have been eliminated.
Actually, I'd give you an "A+" on the whole thing. Fantastic.
especially this part:
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W: So you won’t reconsider?
M: I can’t. (I could hear the hurt in her voice and this made me sad.)
W: Do you realize what you are going to drag them through? Do you really want to have to go through family court?
M: Please stop. I do not want to drag them through a custody battle. However, as their father, I feel that given the choices that I have, it is in their best interest to stay here with me.
W: What made you change your mind?
M: A lot of things have changed. You have a lot on your plate and I felt that it is best that they stay here.
W: Of course you don’t communicate that to me. So typical.
M: Please stop. We’ve been over this and I don’t want to rehash it.
