I'd suggest asking your attorney if you can look at any future letter prior to filing or mailing.
Then, I'd suggest posting them here just to get some feedback
I will definitely be posting any letters here in the future to get feedback. A very difficult lesson learned. Hopefully not a costly one.
Me:45 ExW:48 M:04/97 3 Bombs & 2 ReCons 1st BD 11/10 D Finalized 4/20 D-16 S-14 Going in one more round when you don't think you can. That's what makes all the difference in life.~Rocky Balboa