I don't think you've done that badly. You stated what you believe, which in short is a version of TrueGritter's declaration to his W, which many of us have cribbed. If she wants the D let her do the legwork for it.
BITS Me-51, WAS-52 Kids 2 M-26yrs, H.left 2009, 2 more Bomb drops, Reconnection spring 2013 Change is inevitable, personal growth is a choice. Love is a action and choice you make, every day.