Kat, it is a good start. I like how you got the respect thing in there. I'd like to see a less "business-like" tone and a little more playfulness/flirtiness. Nothing over-the-top, at least not yet.lol.
I love those "leading statements" where you lead them to think about you. "Hey K, has your memory brought up the time we XYZ" or "I know your memory is bringing back good feelings/thoughts/memories about me" or ?? Something along those lines.
Always positive and alwasy about you! "I know you have been thinking about me..." "I'm sure I've been on your mind lately.."
Detach and think of this as just a fun game, OK? No biggie if it doesn't work.
D4ML, I like em a bit rough too. I am the "good girl" in my Rs. The perfect guys make me look bad.lol.
