Sounds good.. you may want to put something about abandoning his children in the first paragraph... you have three kids and mentioning them should be a huge part of any confrontation you make... don't make it about just you or you lose a lot of leverage
And since they wont BE there to say anything on their own BEHALF you ARE speaking for four here.. not just for yourself... remember you are speaking on behalf of you and three others... always speak as if four people are being harmed
